‘Katniss Everdeen is poised, while the count down echoed around her head. The gongs began to count down!’ ⚔
What was the setting like? What was she feeling? How can Y5 show this to hook in the reader? What figurative language devises will help? What about ‘show, don’t tell’ ?
Her heart was pounding, while sweat dripped from her brow!!!
Smashed it Y5! Let’s put it all together!